In class we had to make an information report, we could either pick a person, animal, object or place. I picked a person and his name is DWAYNE JOHNSON he is my favorite boxer and the first person I thought of. When we are finished we had to make an infographic
Hello Phoenix,
ReplyDeleteI read your Dwayne Johnson writing I really liked of how you used a lot of infomation about him and his dad. the thing you need to work on is that you added in infomation more than 1 time so when you are writing next time just check your writing to make sure that you didn't add in infomation more than 1 time. Also make sure that you add in more vocabulary. Really nice writing about your person.
From your best friend Shelby C.